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by sawyerlove (sawyerlove)
at December 1st, 2006 (03:15 pm)

This poem was written by my friend. I'm posting it for her to get some feedback. Thanks in advance from us both.


Promise me you'll hold my hand
As I slowly slip away
Promise me you'll listen carefully
As I whisper all my fears
Promise me you'll bring me back
As I slowly slip away

As I softly stumble
Through broken hearts
And shattered dreams
I gently fall into myself
And slam down to rock bottom
Listen to my cries
Then wipe away my tears

As I struggle through the waters
Trying not to slip under
Getting tired from the struggle
Letting go
Letting myself fall
Safely drowning in myself
Keep me living
Let me know you're there

Just promise me you'll care...

x-posted

Comments

Posted by: deepdownwithin (deepdownwithin)
Posted at: September 12th, 2007 04:35 pm (UTC)

Simple but lovely. I liked it :)