#1remember the fall weddingpumpkin seasonyou much work hardit looks easytheir smiles partyinglike a summer popsiclea serious yearI am above another fashionmy bad#2ice cold nature beneathman and womanthey create a childwhile snow & rain dancedon every bird, flower, squirrelthere were dark blue cloudsgrass has skyI love magnetic poetry! :)
This is more Arazel- honestly, I was waiting for this one to rewrite itself. It could have done with some more editing, too. Anyway, enjoy! I'll try to do better next time. Comments and critiques are always welcome!( Dreamscape: One YearCollapse )
Arazel # 3. I rather dislike this piece, except for the twins. It feels very cliched, but eh. ( TwinsCollapse )Comments and critiques are always welcome :) .
Another Arazel... thing. It takes me forever to edit, by the way, but this time I wrote it in the correct tense the first time. The style might also be slightly different, and it gets a warning for language.( MeltdownCollapse )Comments and critiques are always welcome.
( flyCollapse )
I'm bored at work, so i wrote out this draft of a first chapter to something that has been in my head for a while now. I've been afraid to write for a year, so i'm just excited i finally got something out that I didn't absolutly down right want to kill myself for ever writting into existance (writers block loves me). anyhow. yep.( Just like everyone else's childhood.Collapse )
so i'm sorta new here. i've been lurking around while attempting to find time to start writing a fic that i became inspired to write a couple months ago. i currently have 2 introductions written, but i need opinions on them. any thougths would be greatly appreciated.( intro 1Collapse )( intro 2Collapse )x-posted to my own journal and writers_guild
Hi there. Here's another part of my short story. ( astrid: the theory of eternal sadnessCollapse )
This could really use a new title. It's my first prose that is A. over 1000 words and B. with a character who has a name in several months. I know that the tenses might be awkward in some places, but I wrote it in present tense and then converted it to past tense.( As he leaned on the windowsill...Collapse )Comments and critiques are always welcome!
I meant to post this earlier, but i got sort of busy suddenly >>. Sorry about that ^^ anyway, this is the last chapter, and the longest one. Please read and enjoy and comment?EDIT: once again changed a couple of things. i think the ending's better now ^^